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Capital and period. And, But at the beginning of the sentence.
Has some issues with giving instructions. Asked to redo Activity 3.
Overused the word “it.” Use the specific word “it” is referring to.
Remove “and.”
On instead of for.
Overused the word “they.”
Don’t describe your weakness as permanent.
Get an IQ test.
You are not allowed to call yourself stupid.
Jamaica.
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